Agree:
- high earners praised
- provides security
- makes dreams happen
Disagree:
- effort counts
- accomplishment are key
- full life is success
Topic sentence
- I disagree with the statement that a person’s success in life can only be measured by money.
Supporting sentences
- Although as a society we often judge people by their professions and how much money they earn, it does not cover the whole story of success
- Fulfilling a dream can also be called success
Closing sentence (optional)
- Most of all, we can measure a person’s success by the healthy relationships they form with family and friends and by their satisfaction in the work that supports their daily needs.
I disagree with the statement that a person’s success in life can only be measured by money. Although as a society we often judge people by their professions and how much money they earn, it does not cover the whole story of success. For example, someone who works hard to open a business is more successful than one who simply inherits it from a successful parent. Furthermore, fulfilling a dream of starting a business, singing in a choir or traveling to place one has always hope to see can be called success. Most of all, we can measure a person’s success by the healthy relationships people form with family and friends and by their satisfaction in the work that supports their daily needs.
问题 匆忙下的决定经常是错误的。
Agree:
- Need time to evaluate facts and merit.
- Consider consequences
- Consult others
Disagree:
- first impressions
- quick judgment
- short reaction times
Topic sentence
- Some people believe that decisions made quickly are often wrong, but I disagree with this statement because I have seen situations where they turned out to be right.
Supporting sentences
- First impressions are always right.
- Usually, a quick decision is based on past experience so it can be reliable.
- Quick decisions are critical in situations with little reaction time.
Closing sentence (optional)
- Overall, I maintain that quick decision can be both necessary and right.
Some people believe that decisions made quickly are often wrong, but I disagree with this statement because I have seen situations where they turn out to be very right. For example, I trust my first impressions when I meet people. A few of my very good friends are people that I chose to like immediately upon meeting them. Usually, a quick decision is based on past experience so it can be reliable. Fast thinking helps doctors save lives in the emergency wards and stockbrokers make good deal on the trading floor. Quick decisions are critical in situations with little reaction time such as when we must suddenly make a decision in traffic. Overall, I maintain that quick decision can be both necessary and right.
